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July 18th, 2004, 07:41 PM
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This is a letter from the old Cavalier/Nugget magazine that I adapted for my lady. Is this what you want Mike?
WOMAN BATTLES SLUTTY STEPDAUGHTER TO KEEP HER MAN
Dear Fight Time,
My live-in love and I recently had an experience that I have to share with you. Marjorie, my lover, and I lived together a few years back. She moved away, got married, but she recently returned a widow and we moved back in together. She also returned with a 19 year old stepdaughter, Krissy. They do not get along at all. Krissy is always doing stuff to piss of my lover. It came to a head several week ago when Krissy, who came home drunk, tried to crawl into bed with me. Marjorie caught her entering the room while I slept and went ballistic. She easily overpowered her stepdaughter, then gave her a humiliating spanking before kicking her out of the house.
Well, it didn't take long for Krissy to start up again and she started sending me explicit letters, and leaving even more explicit messages on our answering machine. The last time she called and started talking dirty to our machine Marjorie yanked up the phone. She told Krissy to stop all the nonsense. They started yelling back and forth and finally Marjorie said "Fine. You come over here and we'll settle this once and for all." Krissy said she would be over at five. Marjorie told her she was tutoring an adult in reading at five and six o'clock was better. Marjorie videotapes her lessons so that she can evaluate the student and herself.
I told her that it was less a matter of Krissy wanting me than it was of Krissy wanting to get to Marjorie. Marj said that she knew that, but that the only way to stop it was to teach Krissy a lesson. "I know what I am doing." she said. Then she made me promise on my Mother's grave not to interfere, no matter what happened. "I'll handle this my own way." I had no choice but to agree.
Krissy showed up at the appointed time, ready for battle. As I said, she is 19, and stands about 5'1" and can't weigh 100 pounds. And most of that is in her 40DD tits, and her plump, juicy ass. She is fit and trim, with deeply tanned skin, a sexy face, and frizzy blond curls halfway down her back. She was wearing pink spandex shorts, a tight t-shirt and sneakers, and carrying an big black gym bag.
Marjorie is 49, stands 5'5"and weighs 156 pounds. She has an average body for someone her age, soft in all the right places. Marjorie has soft 34B tits, a soft, round tummy, wide, plump hips, and thick meaty thighs. I have to admit that her ass is wide and soft. It's true that her tits, ass and thighs are kind of soft and saggy, but I love them. And her too. She had hair is in a frizzy, curly perm and she recently dyed it blond. (she normally is a brunette) She is very beautiful, with big bown eyes and a sweet smile. She was wearing a t-shirt, and what I call her "Sex shorts"-skin-tight yellow and grey spandex shorts that make her ass look so round and juicy that I can't keep my hands off it. They always lead to sex. She too wore sneakers.
Marjorie started to explain why Krissy would have to stop this harassment, and why it made no sense. Krissy just started in on her, calling her a whore and a tramp and stuff like that. Marjorie lost and they started in insulting each other. Krissy was really going on about Marjorie's small tits and big ass. Marj shot back that Krissy was not too to big to have her ass paddled. "Or have you forgotten the last time?"
Now you have to understand that there are a few things that Marjorie is sensitive about. First, her age. She is fairly comfortable with pushing fifty, but hates to be reminded about it. Second and third would her tits and her ass. Not that Marjorie runs around say "my tits are too small and my ass is too big,". Nothing like that. But she hates for the queston of size to come up, especially in relation to my ex-girlfriends. I once made the mistake of bringing up an ex'es breast size and she still brings it up once in a while. The last thing she is sensitive about is her pussy. Her bush is very thick and bushy, but what she is sensitive about is her pussy lips. They are very big, and pouty. Not only big, but protrouding. She is always worried that it is ugly.
So naturally these are the points that Krissy started in on. She started with a compliment-sort of:
"Gee, Marj, I can see what he likes about you. It must be that hourglass figure." Krissy laughed. "But it must be six o'cock. All the sand is in the bottom."
Then she started calling Marjorie a "dried up old whore" with a big, sloppy cunt "that a dog wouldn't fuck cause it's too fucking stretched out." Marjorie is sensitive about her age, and her pussy, and just lost it. She charged Krissy, screaming: "I'm going to kill you you dirty little whore."
Krissy side-stepped and slammed her knee deep into Marjorie's soft belly. Marj doubled over, eyes bulging wide, gasping for air. Krissy buried both hands in Marj's curls and slammed her knee up into her soft round pot again and again, at least a dozen times. She kept Marj bent in two, and I thought her spine was going to pop right out of her back. Her arms were just hanging dowm, limp and useless. Krissy yanked her head up by her hair and smashed it down into her upswinging knee. She released her hair and Marjorie was knocked off her feet. She landed flat on her back, hands holding her bloody nose.
Krissy began to kick and stomp Marjorie, flattening her little titties under her shoes. Marj curled into a ball, but Krissy was still stomping her, especially her meaty ass and thighs. She grabbed her by the hair and hauled Marjorie to her feet, grabbed her by the wrist with one hand and by the hair with the other. Then she whipped Marj chest first into the wall. Marjorie took the blow full on the tits and just crumpled to the floor in a sweaty heap. Krissy was stomping her again, then hauled my girl to her feet, spun her around and shoved her back against the wall. She used both fists to pound away at her tits. Marj tried to cover up and Krissy started slamming her knee up into her belly again, working over one of her weak spots. She did this eight or nine times, softening her up. Then she yanked her up by the hair. My poor Marjorie. She was bleary eyed and slack jawed, just standing there, knees together, feet apart, arms hanging limp and useless by her sides. Her eyes were glazed over, bleary and half shut, and her mouth was hanging limply open.
"You're nothing but a big fat cunt with a big fat cunt," Krissy sneered. "And now I'm gonna bust it up, cunt."
Krissy then punched Marjorie right in the cunt. The blow lifted Marj up on her toes, her eyes wide and her mouth open. But no sound would come out. Marjorie later told me that was the most intense pain she had ever felt. That fist had landed squarely between her pussy lips and the pain just shot right through her.
Krissy was not kidding about busting her cunt. She punched my baby in the pussy about twenty times. She dropped to the floor several times, only to be hauled up by the hair. And her clutching hands offered little protection, Krissy either slapped them away, or punched right through them. And her shorts and panties offered her no protection at all.
Krissy was bouncing and dancing like she had just won the Heavywight championship and a sobbing, whimpering Marjorie tried to crawl away. Krissy easily caught up with her, grabbed a handful of hair with one hand and a handful of her meaty ass with the other. Krissy spun her around so they faced each other and went to town. She destroyed Marj with body shots, face slaps and cunt kicks. Within thirty seconds she had Marjorie on her knees begging for mercy.
"Please stop. You win. You can have him. Just stop hitting me," Marjorie blubbered.
"That's not all I'm gonna have," Krissy said as she pulled Marjorie to her feet by her hair. She pummelled her soft, round belly with six hard shots, then flattened her tits with hard punches. She then began pounding rights to her face, about a dozen, then cocked her fist for a final death punch. By this time Marjorie was standing there, totally limp, totally whipped. Her eyes rolled back into her head and Krissy just released her hair. Marjorie hit the floor like a sack of potatoes, landing flush on her battered tits and face, her plump ass sticking high in the air.
I could not believe it. Krissy had kicked Marjorie's ass so fast, and so easily that it was frightening. It had taken her less than four minutes to destroy my woman. Marjorie not only never landed a punch-she never even threw one! She was a mess. Marjorie's left eye was swollen shut, and she had a split lip and a bloody nose. And she had bruises and welts all over her body. Krissy didn't just clean Marjorie's clock-she fucking dismantled it.
Marj began to come around, but was still a little groggy. But when she saw Krissy she just threw herself at her feet, begging and slobbering for mercy. "Please, no more, please. I'll do whatever you say," she blubbered.
"No shit," she said dragging Marjorie to her feet by her hair and ripping her T-shirt off. Marj's bra followed and she stood there in her skin tight spandex shorts. Marjorie has big aerole and big nipples. Krissy latched onto them and began pinching and twisting them. Marjorie was up on her toes, sobbing like a baby.
"Now get them pants off, bitch,"
"Pl..please," Marjorie stammered,"I..I think I wet myself."
True enough there was a big, dark stain in her crotch and the piss was flowing down her thick thighs. Krissy just laughed.
"I said get them pants off bitch. NOW!" she said and gave her nipples an extra pinch and twist. In an instant Marjorie had her shorts down around her ankles. Marjorie jas a big, thick hairy bush and it was clearly evident through her white, piss soaked panties. She also has the biggest pussy lips that I have ever seen. Big, pouting, bulging pussy lips. They, too were evident through her wet panties.
"Panties too, bitch," Krissy said, pinching. Soon they were down around her knees.
She dragged Marjorie across the room by her nipples, sat down in a chair and pulled Marjorie face down across her lap. "I guess you're not too big to go over MY lap," Krissy laughed, laying into Marj's big butt.
Now I love Marjorie, and evrything about her, but she does have a big butt. Marjorie's ass is rather soft and saggy, and fat and flabby. They are just big, soft jelly buns. At the first sway Marj let out a yelp as her head shot up. Her soft ass was completely flattened under Krissy's firm hand. It was like one of those wave machines. Her ass and thighs were shaking like jell-o as Krissy really laid into her ass. Marjorie was soon bawling like a baby, begging Krissy to "Please stop spanking my ass". After the first ten Marjorie's buns were red, and she was soon sobbing uncontrollably. She must have spanked her a good fifty times with her hand, then reached under the chair for her bag, rummaged around in it and pulled out a ping pong paddle. She gave her a good hundred with that, reached into the bag and brought out a wire hairbrush, She gave her a hundred with each side-the hard wooden back and the hard wire bristles. By the time she dropped that Marjorie was crying so hard that she could barely catch her breath, and her ass and thighs were a bright,bright red. Krissy dropped the hairbrush and jammed her middle finger right up Marjorie's asshole. Marjorie was grunting and groaning as Krissy really dug that finger in. She continued to finger frig her butthole, running her fingers over Marj's big, pouty cunt lips until she exploded all over her hand.
Krissy dumped Marjorie on her throbbing ass, yanked her head back by her hair and waved that stinky finger under her nose. It was covered with specks of shit from her own shit chute. Marj tried to turn her head, but the tight grip on her hair prevented that. Krissy commanded "Lick it clean." Marjorie meekly slid her tongue between her lips and obediently began to lick it clean. Krissy then jammed it into her mouth and made her suck it clean.
Krissy stripped and dragged Marjorie to her knees by her hair . "You always seemed to enjoy spanking my ass, so how about eating it." she said as she backed her fat, fleshy ass into her face. At the same time she was pulling Marjorie's face up into her ass crack. She made Marjorie lick it and tongue her butthole. Meekly and obediently Marjorie began to run her tongue up and down the crack of her ass. Marjorie licked and kissed every inch of her young, plump ass. Krissy made her do this for quite a while before she said:"Now the asshole, asshole." Marjorie reached up, spread those buttcheeks and just buried her face between them. Marjorie kissed and licked her asshole. Krissy was loving every minute of it. She came several times with Marj's tongue up her butthole.
Krissy turned around and said "Take a look at a real blonde's bush," to me. Then, to Marj,"And you take a good look. Eat me, you slut." she said, pulling Marjorie's face up into her wet, waiting cunt. Marjorie immediatly began to lick and suck her sopping wet pussy. She had to grab her thighs and hold on as she buried her tongue as far as she could in her stepdaughter's cunt. Marjorie licked her cunt to three powerful orgasms. She turned and made Marjorie lick her ass again.
Krissy was really getting off rubbing her ass in Marjorie's bruised and battered face. She finally slapped Marjorie down with her asscheeks and sat right on her face, wiggling and rubbing her ass all over Marj's humiliated face. Marjorie continued to lick her shit chute and Krissy fingered her pussy to another orgasm.
While Marjorie was busy eating out her poopchute Krissy reached down and pulled Marjorie's panties down to her knees. "Shit, you ain't a mouse, you're a fucking monkey woman,' she laughed when she saw Marjorie's thick, bushy pile of pussy fur. So she immediately yanked out a big handful leaving Marjorie to scream up her ass.
To make matters worse, Marjorie's pussy was juiced up and Krissy saw it right away. "So, eating my asshole gets you hot, does it? Well, wait till I get my hands on that steaming snatch of yours, you pathetic little wimp." She then put both hands to work on Marjorie's hairy cunt, pulling the lips with one hand while shoving three, then four fingers in and out with the other. The only sounds in the room were those fingers squishing in and out of my woman's pussy, and Marjorie's own moans and sobs, muffled under Krissy's ample ass.
Krissy then dragged Marjorie to her feet by her hair and dragged her over to the couch. She threw her face down over the arm, with her face in the cushions and her big ass in the air. She spanked her big, blistered butt another fifty times, then stuck her finger in her face and told her not to dare move. Believe me, she did not. Marjorie just laid there with her face in her hands, sobbing like a baby, her big, blistered butt sticking high in the air. Her ass must have been on fire because it was positively glowing.
Krissy dumped the bag on the couch in front of Marj. Then, much to my surprise, and Marjorie's horror, she pulled out a ten inch black dildo and a tube of KY jelly. She spread Marjorie's swollen butt cheeks, inserted the tube of lubricant up her asshole and squeezed.
"From now on your ass belongs to me, bitch, whenever and wherever I want it, so you had better get used to being on your knees," Krissy taunted.
"Please, Krissy, please. Please don't do it," Marjorie begged her stepdaughter. Krissy just laughed and began to insert the big, black dildo. And with every inch she inserted, Krissy would give it a twist. She worked it in, inch by fat, painful inch. When it was all the way in, buried to the hilt up Marjorie's ass, and Marjorie was sobbing and screaming for mercy, Krissy turned the vibrator on high and proceeded to pump the entire length in and out of Marjorie's tight, tired asshole. Marjorie was kicking and screaming, her ass and thighs shaking like jelly, clawing at the cushions and at her own frizzy, frazzled hair. She must have pumped it in and out a couple of hundred times.
"You fat assed, fat lipped cunt. You're gonna need a diaper by the time I'm through with you," Krissy taunted. "You're gonna think of me every time you shit."
Finally Krissy dragged her sobbing stepmother to her knees and made her hold the dildo up her own ass while she ate out Krissy's pussy and asshole again. Marjorie dove right in, burying her face in Krissy young, tight, sopping wet cunt. Marjorie quickly licked her to four powerful orgasms. Krissy then turned around, bent foward with her hands on her knees and her ass sticking out. She didn't say a word. She didn't have to. By this time Marjorie was on automatic pilot, if Krissy told her to do something she did it immediately and without question. When Krissy stuck her ass out Marjorie rushed right over. Marjorie could not get her face up Krissy's ass fast enough. Marjorie eagerly and hungrily ate Krissy's ass and asshole. Krissy was moaning and groaning, rubbing her ass all over Marjorie's face. She came several more times with Marj's tongue up her butt.
When she was finally satisfied Krissy pulled the dildo out of Marjorie's ass. I won't go into detail, but believe me, it was disgusting. She yanked her head back by her hair and jammed the dirty dildo into Marjorie's mouth. Krissy made her stepmother suck it clean.
Krissy went over to the bag, pulled out a twelve inch long, two inch thick strap-on dildo, which she donned, went over to Marjorie and rolled her onto her belly and rammed it right up her ass. Marjorie was clawing at the carpet and her own bushy curls, screaming bloody murder. Krissy dragged her to her hands and knees and rammed the entire twelve inches in and out of Marj's no longer virgin asshole. She fucked the living shit out of Marjorie, pulling her hair, tugging on her tits, and even fingering her pussy till she came all over her hand. She made Marj lick the hand clean. And slapping her ass. She made Marjorie squeal like a pig, moo like a cow, and finally bark like a dog. Marjorie barked and howled like a bitch dog in heat, the barks coming all the way from her fat, fucked ass. She really reamed Marj's ass out but good.
Krissy pulled out of her ass and grabbed Marj's panties. "Cover that ugly skank up, you dried out old whore," she said, yanking the panties way up into the crack of her ass, Then she rammed the filthy rubber cock into Marjorie's mouth and made her suck that one clean as well.
Krissy then announced that she was moving back in-rent free. And that Marjorie's mouth and ass now belonged to her, so she had better get used to being on her knees. Unless Marjorie had any objections. Marjorie hung her head low and whispered a meek "No."
"No?" Krissy snapped.
"No, no. I mean whatever you say. Fuck my man. Fuck my ass. Anything, Please don't beat me up again." Marjorie blubbered.
"That's what I thought. I'll be back tomorrow with my stuff. I'd love to fuck your man and show him what a real woman can do, but I think I've had my cum quota today."
I had to help Marjorie up. She could barely walk. She was a mess. She had a fat, puffy lip, a bloody nose, and her left eye was swollen completely shut. Marjorie had bruises and welts all over her body. Not to mention her ass and thighs, that were soon going to be black and blue. I had to put her into the tub, and even into bed. She wanted to fuck and I readily complied. We fucked over and over again. I'm not sure whether she needed reassurances about her womanhood, or whether the domination turned her on. I geuss it doesn't matter I fucked her every which way but loose.
Krissy moved in the next day and now loves to torment her stepmother, walking into the room and ordering Marjorie to her knees to service her at her whim, or bending over for an ass fucking on command. Marjorie is scared to death of her tough stepdaughter, and refuses to let me do anything about it but to go along with it. I'm sure that this is not over, and I will let you know what happens.
PS we never realised that when Marjorie had taped her tutoring lesson she had left the camcorder on. From the moment of Krissy's arrival to the end of the night Marjorie's total destruction and humiliation was caught on tape. That even adds to her shame.
<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ July 18, 2004 09:43 PM: Message edited by: MikeJV ]</font>
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July 18th, 2004, 08:54 PM
#2
HB Forum Owner
I have that story... hell, i have the issue it's in!!! I recognized it right away, you did a great job rewriting it as a sequel!
BTW: This is close to what I wanted, thanks.
PS: I have to ask. My fav type of cf is a fatal. would you be willing to do a sequel (doesn't have to be a sequel, but can be to either Marj story) where Marj gets her "female parts" literally destroyed and/or removed? (ripped/bitten/cut off)
PSS: another option is to fatalize either story, and have jean/krissy literally destroy marj as a woman.
Is no prob if you don't/can't, but i wanted to ask.
MikeJV
<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ July 18, 2004 05:56 PM: Message edited by: MikeJV ]</font>
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July 18th, 2004, 10:03 PM
#3
Senior Hostboard Member
Big thanks for both stories, Ladies Room and this one. I liked both of them, I like the Marjorie character very much. Didn't know this story from Cavalier yet.
I'd also like to see a story like MikeJV suggested. It doesn't need to be fatal, but having Marj's womanhood destroyed in one story would be "nice".
Hoping to see more stories from you soon!
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July 18th, 2004, 10:19 PM
#4
Inactive Member
Thanks Mike and Trotz for your kind words. I've never done a fatal story, and Marj would be really pissed if she found out I killed her off. Besides, the fun is having her humiliated time after time. I'm not sure if she will ever get her womanhood totally destroyed, but there are plenty of girls out there willing to mess it up pretty good. And if she knew what was good for her Marj would shave her fur, and save her rivals the trouble of balding her.
Thanks again.
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July 18th, 2004, 10:38 PM
#5
HB Forum Owner
It defeats the whole point of asking you to do it (no prob that you can't, i understand) but i can fatalize either story myself. That isn't a prob is it?
btw: you wouldn't have to kill her, just destroyed is fine.
MikeJV
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July 18th, 2004, 10:38 PM
#6
Senior Hostboard Member
Hey cdbee,
you're argument of having Marjorie humiliated (and her cunt balded) again and again is convincing. But perhaps there could be some more brutal and bloody stories from time to time where Marj won't be able to have sex afterwards (or for quite some time).
Or the defeats getting worse from fight to fight...?
But again: the pre-fight, the fight itself and the humiliation -- all great done.
What's up next for Marj, do you have another story in mind?
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July 18th, 2004, 10:46 PM
#7
Inactive Member
Feel free to adapt any of my posts to suit your own tastes, I've done the same thing myself.
And yes, Marj's cunt will be busted, and busted badly, from time to time.
What's next?
Marj owns a house and just signed a years lease with a new tennant, who just happens to be an ex-girlfriend of mine.
Or perhaps it will be that young black girl who just moved in next door?
I'm not quite sure what will be next, all I know is that the one person who will not be enjoying the fights is Marj.
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July 18th, 2004, 10:50 PM
#8
HB Forum Owner
Cool, thanks. those ideas sound fun, (and I'm glad she'll get busted badly) how about the black girl, and have Marj dyed ALL blonde now. *wink*
MikeJV
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July 18th, 2004, 10:53 PM
#9
Inactive Member
So Mike, you want Marj bleqached for a black vs white catfight, huh?
I won't kill her but I'll bet you want her busted real bad, right?
I'm curious? How bad?
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July 19th, 2004, 12:21 AM
#10
HB Forum Owner
How bad? Well, i know from various sources that getting busted badly will leave her crotch swollen and bruised, and her sexless, for approx a month, more if the damage is severe. (not talking permanent damage, but a really severe beating and/or abuse will do heavy temporary damage. (the bruises will be near black the first week or so) Same applies to the breasts, as both are all soft tissue)
MikeJV
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